Boldrin/Majul Final

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2 Comments.

  1. Nice concept and spread, but seeing people i the renderings would be a nice way to convey scale.

  2. Team,

    I agree with Jared’s comments regarding scale as well. I think your design proposal is extremely strong, and your rendering should be the “punch” on this board. Right now, there is an issue with hierarchy and organization. Consider the blocks of information you are trying to convey and compose the board accordingly. Those blocks should be in service of your big idea, which is one of the best put forward in the class. Start with a simple grid and work out from there. It seems obvious, but it works.

    Great job!
    Drew