Johnson / Hughes Final Project Draft 1.2

Leave a comment


  1. Hi Katy and Jonathan,

    Nice work with the rendering on the second page! Regarding your concept, I like the idea that you can sit in between the waffle sections, and, as our reviewer mentioned, I wonder if it could have been made more clear as a motivation for using the waffle as the method for constructing your sculpture, in addition to its shading and ventilating properties. Nice work.


  2. I liked the way you showed process and structural elements on your boards. The two graphics showing an aerial view of the pedestrian island are not consistent. The traffic pattern only appears in one, which is confusing. I know they were meant to convey two different things, so maybe changing the color or opacity levels in one of the diagrams might make them appear “more different than the same.”